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Post by Upgrade on Sat Aug 22, 2009 5:48 pm

This story is called SuperBunny it's from a few months back
Part 1
I sighed again. What was my heart trying to tell me? Was I really something other than a ordinary rabbit? Do my dreams actually mean something? I had all these questions stuck in my thoughts but nobody to ask them to. How I longed for a real companion...somebody who actually understood everything I said...not just that thumping means I don't like something and biting means I hate someone;sure even if I did have someone to ask them to,whats the point in knowing? Its not like I could ever escape these bars unnoticed and even if I could guilt would drive me insane. I could never betray the human that feeds,protects and brings me the only companionship I know of,even then if I could bypass all that,what if my heart failed me? What if they were only foolish dreams,what if I had a sad death awaiting me? I know I have to make a choice soon though...I only have a few more measly years,and my escape might take half of that.

Part 2
That night I dreamt a dream so real;it was probaly the future or maybe even the past? Whatever it was it gave me such inspiration. So much that in the morning I actually thought I had purple scales. It was then I realised they were real. I was no rabbit at all! Well maybe,but no pet rabbit! That day I didn't really know what I was doing,I just laid there and waited for my owner to let me out to play but this time I wouldn't just be playing,I'd be playing at escaping.Soon enough that time came. I don't know if it was hours,days or even months ,that i do not know...all i know is that it came to soon...I licked my owner,i'd never done that before. She hugged me,told all the family and let me have a super long play,like in the ole' days. I admit I fell asleep,but this turned out to be good in the end as I found out another superpower of such,the ability to talk to other kinds.

Part 3.
Day after day I learned power after power. The time had come to leave. I left a note for my owner as I could write now. I honestly didn't know if she'd believe it was me,so I picked it up in my mouth,gave it to her and ran off. I wondered...wondered if she'd come looking for me or trust fate. I was her pride and joy,the daughter she never had. She'd often said that ''If I hadn't have adopted you I'da given you a proper name,but I know the importance of them once granted''. I sighed,Simba was the lamest name I knew of,and I was a girl! Anyway I went with pride on my little trip around the world,even god didn't know this fate...only satan. I grinned then laughed. What was I doing walking? I could f'ing fly! I lifted my tail up and shot up into the air. First stop,the pet clothing shop,I couldn't go around naked,I was no longer a ordinary rabbit...I had more than humane powers after all;humans dont go around naked! I wish they did though...they're the only 'normal' of earth's creature that do...im sure there gracious leader didn't intend that. *coughcough*

Part 4
I managed to steal my new outfit yesterday;it's totally ace,a purple cape with purple goggles. Well it wasn't really stealing,im just a rabbit after all...it's not like shopkeepers' would think I did it on purpose,just for a game,a measly game.Games...i'd learned so much about them since I got my flying ability! Children play tag,hide & seek and ball games,dogs play chase & fetch,cats play 'pounce' and rabbits well just play with toys. Well normal rabbits at least. I play with the world. You see with my powers I can change the world around me,from moving your house to changing the king. I can do all of that, cool isn't it? I also met a friendly dog today,he promised to keep my secret in return for a bone,greedy dog but and surprisingly enough I trust him. If he tells anyone it's beddybye's for him though!

Part 5
Guess what? I met another super rabbit today! He says he's retired now though and he never thought he'd live to see another as he was the last one,or so he thought! His girl must've cheated on him...mhm. Anyway he told me ALOT about superrabbiting. Stuff that I never saw on those cheesy cartoons when my owner and I watched T.V. My owner,how I missed her;come on I even hated her at times,the way she scolded me,the way so kept my locked up most of the time, and here I was wishing for my old life back when I had all thes cool superpowers. Anyway,Old Greedy Guts the dog turned out to be a fraud,as soon as I spoke to him he was trying to hide the fact that he was a superdog. He snuck up me today and attacked,but luckily I was able to defend myself and run away like a cowardly wimp,tricking him to think I was gone then again,sneak up on him and go in for the kill. My first enemy defeated,how proud I am!

Part 6

I lost my powers today,I met this evil guniea pig of sorts who scratched my eye out,turns out the eye was the source to my power.I knew my eye was weird,I'd always felt it moving,like it had a mind of it's own! I've .got. to go back to that retired superbunny,see if he knows what to do,or can even lend me a eye! That'd be weird,having somebody else's eye,I wonder if i'd be able to see out of it? Or old superguy will be able to see,or whoever's eye it was;whatever,aif that doesn't work,at least he MIGHT be able to give me a walkthrough on how to get that darn eye back.Without my powers i'm utterly helpless,somebody might kill me,or a wretched child might capture me a cuddle and squeeze me till I burst,like I was some sort of 'toy'!

Part 7
I've become quite a elderly rabbit by a lab ray! They'res sadly no way to return to my younger years,so im pretty much stuck...there is this cute little girl who found me wandering the streets and said she'd give me a home. I smiled;the girl noticed a gave me a puzzled look. I whispered ''Can you keep a secret?'' the girl rubbed her eyes,then answered,hoping for no reply it seemed. She mumbled a quick ''Yes'' then started running,almost regretting what she had said. ''I talk,but only when I want to'' I grinned at her,then stuck my tongue out. Circus Tricks,TV,even Mom & Dad I just won't be persuaded,so your freinds'll just think your a weird girl who imagines her rabbit can talk. I sighed,this may still be a good life after all...
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Re: Upgrade:||OldStory

Post by zoids25 on Thu Aug 27, 2009 9:31 am

its too long.. can you summarized it?



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Post by Mystic_gohan2 on Thu Aug 27, 2009 12:56 pm

no sake for reading good stories i will read it
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Post by zoids25 on Fri Aug 28, 2009 12:43 pm

did you complete it?



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Re: Upgrade:||OldStory

Post by Upgrade on Sat Aug 29, 2009 3:50 pm

^
you talking to me?
if so,yes it's complete.
and lol it's not really long,but I'll summerize it anyway.
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This bunny discovers he has magical powers,he goes on adventures,he grows elderly,he retires. The end xD
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Post by zoids25 on Sun Aug 30, 2009 5:07 am

oh i get it.. weird bunny ^^ Mudkip happy



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Re: Upgrade:||OldStory

Post by kolmad on Fri Feb 05, 2010 2:31 pm

yeah really
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Post by Linky on Fri Feb 05, 2010 11:53 pm

Nice story!

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